Enter, stage right: Griffer Yellowpaw

[Griffer Yellowpaw]

Character Name: Griffer Yellowpaw
Gender: Female
Species: Stoat
Age: 9 seasons
Rank: Villager
Weapons:
Physical Description:

Griffer is a well built stoat female. She has a sleek body covered in medium length fur thats the color of wet sand, her front left paw is a bright wheat color. From the tip of her snout and down her back runs a darker brown stripe that ends at the tip of her tail. Griffer's eye teeth potrude slightly from her top lip. As most stoats go, she has a fierce look that could scare the feathers off a sparrow.

Personality:

Griffer is a kind soul, she loves children and spending time gardening flowers. However she does know how to fight and fend for herself or anyone she promises to protect. She's loyal and keeps her head about her, never losing it over anything silly. All the stoat traits come along with this as well, she's cunning, can be very persuasive and devious, but Griffer never uses these traits unless absolutely necessary.

History:

Griffer was abandon as a pup, her parents didn't want her getting in their way. So they wrapped her up in a torn rag of a blanket and left the new born on the side of a well used trail, not caring what happened to her. After nearly a day without love, food, or warmth, Griffer was on the edge of dying. Her cries were growing weaker and weaker, until she was found, at twilight, by a traveling hoard of thieving foxes. The leader of the hoard, a Vixen of terrible background, raised the young stoat and taught her the ways of the perfect thief. After three seasons of teaching, the vixen stationed Griffer outside the gates of Redwall, the stoat baby looked very ragged, malnurished, and very emaciated. The Redwall Abbess took pity on the baby and took her in, not knowing that this was a trick by thief Vixen. For three more seasons, Griffer stole from the Abbey, taking food, clothing, and anything else the Hoard needed.

After a while, the badger mother caught Griffer and she was punished greatly and tossed out of the Abbey. In anger, Griffer went after the fox hoard and using every melee skill she learned from the otters, scattered and ripped apart the hoard, not killing them all but dealing a bit of damage. Griffer saved her 'mother' for last, by killing her with her own paws. After the horrendous fight, Griffer was terribly injured and begged to be allowed to live at Redwall once again, promising to behave and never again steal from the Abbey or anyone else.

For three more seasons, she lived at the abbey, helping out in the cellars with the Hedgehogs until the day she figured it was time to graduate and go out on her own. Saying goodbye to her family, she set out, following the River Moss for miles.

[Justyn]

Wow, this looks like a really interesting character! On top of that Otter's fort needs some more meat,

I can't approve it though, sorry

[Terg Broadsword]

It looks great except for a few things.

First of all, on this site seasons are looked at like years. So if you keep this current age of 3 seasons that would make your character a Dibbun basically.

Second, vermin are typically not welcomed at Otter Fort with a few exceptions. If you decide to keep the age of 3 seasons then you'll probably be ok since she's just a Dibbun, but if you make her age above, say 13, you may have some problems. I'm not saying you can't have her live at OF but just be aware that she may run into some (A lot) of unfriendliness.

[Griffer Yellowpaw]

Ah, right, I took seasons as years too, but sort of figured it to be like it would for the actual animal (like, if a real stoat was 3 years old, it'd be full grown, but I can up the years if need be ^_^)

But the reason why I chose a stoat was because of the unfriendliness she would encounter, Its like a growing up thing for her, she's lived with such friendly creatures all her life, this is just her going out on her own. So like, if she's put on probation, it'd be cool, no hard feelings because well...Griffer understands that stoat=mean, nasty, generally an all around bad creature.

Just please accept her! This is the first and most amazing Redwall RP I've come across and it looks so legit! *puppydog eyes*

[Griffer Yellowpaw]

I edited my history and age....hope its a little better

[Terg Broadsword]

I like the history! Accepted. Go ahead and star RPing whenever you like.