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Post by enteitrilion on Oct 26, 2009 0:58:48 GMT -5
Character Name: Choppre Gender: Male Species: Rat Age: 19 seasons Rank: Warrior Weapons: Longsword Physical Description: Rather large rat, with a scar across his right eye. Wears a tattered kilt and often walks with a staff and carries his longswrord in a sheath on his back. His longsword is older than he is, even though he doesnt know where it came from, he feels a bond to it. Personality: Very rough around the edges. Suspicious of everyone around him, rarely speaks to anyone. Hes never known empathy or kindness, and is used to being frowned upon. He suffers from amnesia, but has flashes of memories when he sleeps. History: Knows little about his past life, due to the amnesia he received from a beating that caused a scar over his right eye. All he has is his kilt and his longsword. He wanders alone, and steers clear of populated areas, such as the woods or the coast. He meditates every morning, and pratices his sword techniques afterwards. He harvests his own food, makes makeshift housing when he needs rest, and keeps mostly to himself.
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Post by Terg Broadsword on Oct 26, 2009 16:55:42 GMT -5
OK one thing. Could you work just a bit on the description? What color are his eyes? What color is his fur? fix that and you're good to go.
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